Tuesday, November 9, 2010

YEAR 6 WRITING

Camp was the most fantastic thing we did all year. We went to pretty palmgrove in kool kapit and went on a bright white long water slide and at the end was dark brown middy water. This is one thing that I did when I was a year 6 and it was amazing. I will hate to leave Riverdale but I have to go.There is so many great teachers like wonderful Walker and cool Currie and there is so much to do in fact I there is more to do than legs on a long green millipede. Thanks riverdale for lots of things to do and I want to wish you luck for years to come and for one last time I want to say GOODBYE!!!!!

1 comment:

  1. That's a great piece of writing Grace. You used lots of similes and I liked how you used Millipede to describe things we do at Riverdale.

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