Tuesday, June 22, 2010

my times video (1)

video

one of my best discription

Browns and reds yellows and orange levees
falling from the trees covering the ground
like a big carpet that never stops

As you walk upon the crunchy colorful carpet
with the fresh air biting at your neck
and the wind slowly blowing a way the carpet

You feel safe like notting can hurt you
you start to forget all your worry's
and your problems slip away
all you can do as stand and stare
at the beautiful autumn levees


i learn t that the more voice you put in the better
your writing gets.
i did good voice like ''Browns and reds yellows and orange levees
falling from the trees covering the ground
like a big carpet that never stops''
my next leaning step is
to add more things like'' bright Browns and reds yellows and orange


one of my best vis lang


This is one of my best visual language
because it is bright and bold and all the pictures
go with the poem. The border captures my eye.

Thursday, June 3, 2010

Cross crounty laps count


I did good because I did my goal every time
Next time I would give myself a harder goal
I learn t that if you keep a past you can go farther.