Wednesday, December 8, 2010

mangering self

first mangering self
second mangering self
third mangering self

my hip hop hippo vis lang


I learnt that when you use bright and bold colors It stands out more.
Next time I would color all 1 way.
I did my hippo well.

Quiddage writing

La soupers was the business I was in. It was me ,Maddy,Luce and Zia. we made taste tingly soup and soft mouth watering bread .


In one week we made 10,000 snidges or that what I heard. We made lots of money because we had good price and great veg soup.Our prices are : 10 and 20 and 40 singes for bread 10 for a small 20 for a median and 40 for a large. soup s50.We got lots of awesome feed back.

I really enjoy working In or business. It was so amazing.

Wednesday, December 1, 2010

hurdles


Bang! I got in to the finals for hurdles . And this is the story of how I did what I did ...

We got in groups for the the hurdles '' 5 people in a group,'' said Mr Bron ''girls first no time to waste''.
I got in to a group my heart pounding I was so so nervous [ at this time I did not know I was going to get in to the finals] .

On your marks get set good luck go and we were off The bang was so loud it was like a boom louder than any other boom . All I could think about is run jump run jump every time I would jump.

I passed the finish line 2ND and got a lovely light blue rod and was sent back down to race again. On you marks get set go we were off again we did this until we got to the finals.

And thats the story of the girls 10 and 11 year old hurdles races .

Tuesday, November 9, 2010

YEAR 6 WRITING

Camp was the most fantastic thing we did all year. We went to pretty palmgrove in kool kapit and went on a bright white long water slide and at the end was dark brown middy water. This is one thing that I did when I was a year 6 and it was amazing. I will hate to leave Riverdale but I have to go.There is so many great teachers like wonderful Walker and cool Currie and there is so much to do in fact I there is more to do than legs on a long green millipede. Thanks riverdale for lots of things to do and I want to wish you luck for years to come and for one last time I want to say GOODBYE!!!!!

Thursday, November 4, 2010

speeches

Speeches

Written and Oral Language

We are learning to:

* Present material, conveying meaning clearly and accurately

* Write and speak, expressing personal viewpoints, sequencing ideas logically

Speech Topic: drugs


Self Assessment from video

Speech in front of class

Success Criteria:

Speech Writing

My speech followed the hamburger technique and was logically sequenced

yes

yes

The point I was making was easy to understand

yes

yes

My speech contained research

yes

yes

My speech had voice and was interesting

yes

yes

My speech was in my words

yes

yes

My big idea comes through strongly

yes

yes

Presentation

I enunciated my words clearly

yes

1-2

Terminal consonants


Ts and ds in the middles of words


Swallowed my goobies first


Seperated my words


My voice was loud enough

yes

1-2

I learnt my speech off by heart

yes

yes

I used expression in my voice

yes

yes

I used enough volume to be heard by all

yes

yes

I used eye-contact

yes

1-2

My speech was not too fast, not too slow

yes

1-2

My speech was between 2 and 3 minutes

yes

Yes

My presentation materials supported but didn’t repeat my words

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-

Total:

Expert

Expert

Novice – 5 Apprentice – 6 Practitioner – 11 Expert – 14

Self Assessment after Video

Self Assessment after Speech






speech video


Monday, October 25, 2010

pi feedback

Personal Investigations

Assessment Matrix

Expert
 Shows weeks of work
 Audience is very interested
 I've done the work myself
 Research in my words – with my personality in it
 Contains humour(?)
 Interaction with the audience
 Speech is confident, clear and with action and expression

Practititioner
 Shows three or four weeks of work
 Contains pictures and steps
 Information is interesting and in my own words
 Adults have supported me without doing work for me
 Some humour
 Some interaction
 Audience is attentive
 Speech is clear

Apprentice
 Shows about a week’s work
 A little information – some in my own words
 Adults have done some of it for me
 No interaction with the audience
 No humour
 Poor presentation
 Few pictures

Novice
 Reads the words on the PowerPoint or Glog
Clearly started at the last minute
 Hardly any info
 Parents have done a lot of it for me
 No pictures or steps
 Copied straight off the internet
 No humour
 Not finished on time
 Untidy presentation
 Speech is not very clear

Sunday, October 17, 2010

Tuesday, October 12, 2010

pi feed back

put your feedback for my pi
here

home fun score

i got
100 %
want means I got no no's
I have got 96 and 98 but I have
never got 100.
I think I did good for my score that means I got s200
[ yay me ]

Monday, October 11, 2010

term 3 goal

my term 3 goal was to get to the top of stage 6
well I did not get to the top of stage 6 but on the bright side I did
learn my 3 4 6 and 7
and I did well to learn my 3 4 6 and 7 times tables
next time I would try harder but I think I did well

my next goal : to keep my desk tidy.

Sunday, September 12, 2010

my best vis lang

this is one of my best visual language
because the title and all the pictures go with the
peom.
next time I would do my house a bit better and a little shorter
because a big and long.
I learnt that the more time you put in to it the better it will be.

Thursday, September 9, 2010

term 3 petter spelling test


i did get better last time i was 11.4
but i don't know why i did not get loud right
but i did do good for being half a sleep and look i have gone up 1 year!
:}

Monday, August 30, 2010

basic facts test 2








I think i did well but next time not spend so much time
on one question.
i did my sub test again and got better
also to only think about one question at a time not two
like 6x4 and 7x6 because I does not work doing two.

Sunday, August 29, 2010

my wallet





Wednesday, August 25, 2010

Team Fitness

my fitness did improve

I leant that when you do it you do get better like soccer juggles I got better and that If you are not good a one thing you will be better at another.

next time I would try to get better at my tennis ball runs and not spend so much seconds on making the ball sit there and try to go a bit fast

I think that I did well in the step up because i aways got better and the time that I didn't I was not far off.

Tuesday, August 10, 2010

self assessment for my self assessment

I could write more things about not
just about the 3 thing s .

I could say
it was my best piece of vis lang
because I used lots of bold bright colors
and had no white was on the page. my pictures
could have done better eg eg.

not just .

This is one of my best visual language
because it is bright and bold and all the pictures
go with the poem. The border captures my eye.

Wednesday, July 28, 2010

term 3 goal


some strategies
  • be focus on the goal
  • get the teacher and mum and dad.
  • do one thing towards it each day

and get tested alot.

Sunday, July 25, 2010

PI Matrixs

Personal Investigations
Assessment Matrix
Expert
 Shows weeks of work
 Audience is very interested
 I've done the work myself
 Research in my words – with my personality in it
 Contains humour(?)
 Interaction with the audience
 Speech is confident, clear and with action and expression

Practititioner
 Shows three or four weeks of work
 Contains pictures and steps
 Information is interesting and in my own words
 Adults have supported me without doing work for me
 Some humour
 Some interaction
 Audience is attentive
 Speech is clear

Apprentice
 Shows about a week’s work
 A little information – some in my own words
 Adults have done some of it for me
 No interaction with the audience
 No humour
 Poor presentation
 Few pictures

Novice
 Reads the words on the PowerPoint or GlogClearly started at the last minute
 Hardly any info

 Parents have done a lot of it for me
 No pictures or steps
 Copied straight off the internet
 No humour
 Not finished on time
 Untidy presentation
 Speech is not very clear

Wednesday, July 21, 2010

home fun term 2

98%

I think i did well because i got better that last
time.
Next time i would like to get 1oo% .
i could get my book singed every time
because that's what i didn't get a yes.

Tuesday, July 20, 2010

my term two goal

my term two goal was ''to get better at my spelling '' and i did
my base score at the the start was 15 but now i am on 21 .
I think I did do well!!

Term 2 PI

For my and Lucy's PI we are doing Golf because we thought we could make it more interesting and that is why we choose golf as our term 2 PI.

Tuesday, June 22, 2010

my times video (1)

video

one of my best discription

Browns and reds yellows and orange levees
falling from the trees covering the ground
like a big carpet that never stops

As you walk upon the crunchy colorful carpet
with the fresh air biting at your neck
and the wind slowly blowing a way the carpet

You feel safe like notting can hurt you
you start to forget all your worry's
and your problems slip away
all you can do as stand and stare
at the beautiful autumn levees


i learn t that the more voice you put in the better
your writing gets.
i did good voice like ''Browns and reds yellows and orange levees
falling from the trees covering the ground
like a big carpet that never stops''
my next leaning step is
to add more things like'' bright Browns and reds yellows and orange


one of my best vis lang


This is one of my best visual language
because it is bright and bold and all the pictures
go with the poem. The border captures my eye.

Thursday, June 3, 2010

Cross crounty laps count


I did good because I did my goal every time
Next time I would give myself a harder goal
I learn t that if you keep a past you can go farther.

Monday, May 17, 2010

zia and my tsunami glog




We had lots of info about the topic
Next time we could have more pictures
I learnt that they dont look bad but they are and they can go as fast as 80 km

Wednesday, May 12, 2010

stage six maths test


I did better then last time but I could do better

Sunday, April 18, 2010

sr for term 1 goal

I think I did my term 1 goal
but I could get better.




Personal Investigations Assessment Matrix

Personal Investigations
Assessment Matrix
Expert
Shows weeks of work
 Audience is very interested
I've done the work myself
 Research in my words – with my personality in it
 Contains humour(?)
 Interaction with the audience
Speech is confident, clear and with action and expression

Practititioner
 Shows three or four weeks of work
 Contains pictures and steps
 Information is interesting and in my own words
 Adults have supported me without doing work for me
 Some humour
 Some interaction
 Audience is attentive
 Speech is clear

Apprentice
 Shows about a week’s work
 A little information – some in my own words
 Adults have done some of it for me
 No interaction with the audience
 No humour
 Poor presentation
 Few pictures

Novice
 Clearly started at the last minute
 Hardly any info
 Parents have done a lot of it for me
 No pictures or steps
 Copied straight off the internet
 No humour
 Not finished on time
 Untidy presentation
 Speech is not very clear

Wednesday, March 31, 2010

My best strategies

I did easy ways to work out both problems.
My next step would to learn more ways.
The number line strategies add don't sub.

my best writing

I was very creative with my writing.
I learnt when to put fullstops in.
My next lerning step is to put have before done

Monday, March 29, 2010

Sunday, March 28, 2010

My best visual language

Next time I would of have done block letters

I did good pictures because they go with the poem

I learnt that the more brighter colours you use it stands out more

Monday, March 22, 2010

graces bank account

graces bank account




I budgeted my snides
I did not spend them all

Next time I would not get as much out
I leant that you really have to keep them
safe because people will take them

Wednesday, March 10, 2010

divison

This one has always been my worst and it sill is.

times



Times has always been my best
but now it is not

sub


This one is not to good because
I did not get over 80%

plus


my addition fact were the best because
I got over 80% on this test

Thursday, February 25, 2010

Thursday, February 18, 2010

stage six maths test

I did my basic facts part of the test well

Next time i would do more on the `write the word
I learnt that I should go for the ones I know first

my goal

Wednesday, February 17, 2010

thorws with a tennis ball

I think my 1st and 2nd were the best average`s

I could improve on my 3rd one because it is behind

I would try to get them all around the same height if we do it again.

Monday, February 15, 2010

my first visual language


I think I did great pictures that go what my work
I could do a better border next time
I learn that brighter and bolder are better than pale because it caches the eyes of people

Thursday, February 11, 2010

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