Tuesday, October 12, 2010

pi feed back

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11 comments:

  1. Well done grace!!! very green pi! lots of info bnut mabey you could of spoken clearer and we like the moto thing!

    Ollie, Harry, Chaz!

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  2. cool pi we liked the little jingle and you need to work on here presentation because the words were over other words and you also need to either bring more items or lower the people use.

    Hadley & Alan

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  3. Awesome PI Grace!
    Interesting topic and you had lots of information and logos. You sounded like a adult!!
    Next time: Face the audience a bit more and speak clearer.
    Well done Grace!
    Kale, Corbin, Mike and Britt =P

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  4. that was a really fun PI Grace we liked it how you had good interaction with the audiance but next time you could add more info to your PI

    Nat :)

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  5. good job grace
    you spook clearly and loudly but maybe you could of got the website up and maybe set it up before but apart from that great job,
    Sara,Sophie,Corbin

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  6. WOW COOL P.I GRACE!
    You did really good at speaking and doing the jingle
    But next time maybe try and speak clearly
    KATE AND LIBBY!

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  7. well done grace it was intersting but maybe next time you could put more writing on the powerpoint

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  8. Great job! Cool facts! Awesome power point!
    You could have worked on not saying things over and over again, and it wasn't very rehersed, but apart from that fantastic job!

    By Madi, Zia and Luce

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  9. Alana and Kelly! great P.I
    Alana - What you did well was you spoke clearly and your pics were big next time be more happy =)

    Kelly-What you did well was you spoke clearly and your pics were big next time be more happy =)

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  10. that was funny how you made us do that it was good

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  11. good PI I really liked it. You spoke clearly. Use both sides of paper, To keep New Zealand safer! (Were green) Next time probably make the pictures a bit clearer.
    Hannah and Natalya.

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