one of my best discription

Browns and reds yellows and orange levees
falling from the trees covering the ground
like a big carpet that never stops

As you walk upon the crunchy colorful carpet
with the fresh air biting at your neck
and the wind slowly blowing a way the carpet

You feel safe like notting can hurt you
you start to forget all your worry's
and your problems slip away
all you can do as stand and stare
at the beautiful autumn levees


i learn t that the more voice you put in the better
your writing gets.
i did good voice like ''Browns and reds yellows and orange levees
falling from the trees covering the ground
like a big carpet that never stops''
my next leaning step is
to add more things like'' bright Browns and reds yellows and orange