MY END OF YEAR WORDLE

mangering self

first mangering self
second mangering self
third mangering self

my hip hop hippo vis lang

I learnt that when you use bright and bold colors It stands out more.
Next time I would color all 1 way.
I did my hippo well.

Quiddage writing

La soupers was the business I was in. It was me ,Maddy,Luce and Zia. we made taste tingly soup and soft mouth watering bread .

In one week we made 10,000 snidges or that what I heard. We made lots of money because we had good price and great veg soup.Our prices are : 10 and 20 and 40 singes for bread 10 for a small 20 for a median and 40 for a large. soup s50.We got lots of awesome feed back.

I really enjoy working In or business. It was so amazing.

hurdles

Bang! I got in to the finals for hurdles . And this is the story of how I did what I did ...

We got in groups for the the hurdles '' 5 people in a group,'' said Mr Bron ''girls first no time to waste''.

I got in to a group my heart pounding I was so so nervous [ at this time I did not know I was going to get in to the finals] .

On your marks get set good luck go and we were off The bang was so loud it was like a boom louder than any other boom . All I could think about is run jump run jump every time I would jump.

I passed the finish line 2ND and got a lovely light blue rod and was sent back down to race again. On you marks get set go we were off again we did this until we got to the finals.

And thats the story of the girls 10 and 11 year old hurdles races .

YEAR 6 WRITING

Camp was the most fantastic thing we did all year. We went to pretty palmgrove in kool kapit and went on a bright white long water slide and at the end was dark brown middy water. This is one thing that I did when I was a year 6 and it was amazing. I will hate to leave Riverdale but I have to go.There is so many great teachers like wonderful Walker and cool Currie and there is so much to do in fact I there is more to do than legs on a long green millipede. Thanks riverdale for lots of things to do and I want to wish you luck for years to come and for one last time I want to say GOODBYE!!!!!

speeches

Speeches

Written and Oral Language

We are learning to:

Present material, conveying meaning clearly and accurately

Write and speak, expressing personal viewpoints, sequencing ideas logically

Speech Topic: drugs

		Self Assessment from video	Speech in front of class
Success Criteria:
Speech Writing
My speech followed the hamburger technique and was logically sequenced		yes	yes
The point I was making was easy to understand		yes	yes
My speech contained research		yes	yes
My speech had voice and was interesting		yes	yes
My speech was in my words		yes	yes
My big idea comes through strongly		yes	yes
Presentation
I enunciated my words clearly		yes	1-2
Terminal consonants
Ts and ds in the middles of words
Swallowed my goobies first
Seperated my words
My voice was loud enough		yes	1-2
I learnt my speech off by heart		yes	yes
I used expression in my voice		yes	yes
I used enough volume to be heard by all		yes	yes
I used eye-contact		yes	1-2
My speech was not too fast, not too slow		yes	1-2
My speech was between 2 and 3 minutes		yes	Yes
My presentation materials supported but didn’t repeat my words		­‑	-
Total:		Expert	Expert

Novice – 5 Apprentice – 6 Practitioner – 11 Expert – 14

Self Assessment after Video

Self Assessment after Speech






speech video

pi feedback

Personal Investigations

Assessment Matrix

Expert
 Shows weeks of work
 Audience is very interested
 I've done the work myself
 Research in my words – with my personality in it
 Contains humour(?)
 Interaction with the audience
 Speech is confident, clear and with action and expression

Practititioner
 Shows three or four weeks of work
 Contains pictures and steps
 Information is interesting and in my own words
 Adults have supported me without doing work for me
 Some humour
 Some interaction
 Audience is attentive
 Speech is clear

Apprentice
 Shows about a week’s work
 A little information – some in my own words
 Adults have done some of it for me
 No interaction with the audience
 No humour
 Poor presentation
 Few pictures

Novice
 Reads the words on the PowerPoint or Glog
Clearly started at the last minute
 Hardly any info
 Parents have done a lot of it for me
 No pictures or steps
 Copied straight off the internet
 No humour
 Not finished on time
 Untidy presentation
 Speech is not very clear

term 4 goal

pi feed back

put your feedback for my pi

here

home fun score

i got

100 %

want means I got no no's

I have got 96 and 98 but I have

never got 100.

I think I did good for my score that means I got s200

[ yay me ]

term 3 goal

my term 3 goal was to get to the top of stage 6

well I did not get to the top of stage 6 but on the bright side I did

learn my 3 4 6 and 7

and I did well to learn my 3 4 6 and 7 times tables

next time I would try harder but I think I did well

my next goal : to keep my desk tidy.

my best vis lang

this is one of my best visual language
because the title and all the pictures go with the
peom.
next time I would do my house a bit better and a little shorter
because a big and long.
I learnt that the more time you put in to it the better it will be.

term 3 petter spelling test

i did get better last time i was 11.4
but i don't know why i did not get loud right
but i did do good for being half a sleep and look i have gone up 1 year!
:}

basic facts test 2

I think i did well but next time not spend so much time

on one question.

i did my sub test again and got better

also to only think about one question at a time not two

like 6x4 and 7x6 because I does not work doing two.

my wallet

Team Fitness

my fitness did improve

I leant that when you do it you do get better like soccer juggles I got better and that If you are not good a one thing you will be better at another.

next time I would try to get better at my tennis ball runs and not spend so much seconds on making the ball sit there and try to go a bit fast

I think that I did well in the step up because i aways got better and the time that I didn't I was not far off.

self assessment for my self assessment

I could write more things about not

just about the 3 thing s .

I could say

it was my best piece of vis lang

because I used lots of bold bright colors

and had no white was on the page. my pictures

could have done better eg eg.

not just .

This is one of my best visual language
because it is bright and bold and all the pictures
go with the poem. The border captures my eye.

miss morris math tests

interview sheet term 3

term 3 goal

some strategies

• be focus on the goal
• get the teacher and mum and dad.
• do one thing towards it each day

and get tested alot.

PI Matrixs

Personal Investigations

Assessment Matrix

Expert
 Shows weeks of work
 Audience is very interested
 I've done the work myself
 Research in my words – with my personality in it
 Contains humour(?)
 Interaction with the audience
 Speech is confident, clear and with action and expression

Practititioner
 Shows three or four weeks of work
 Contains pictures and steps
 Information is interesting and in my own words
 Adults have supported me without doing work for me
 Some humour
 Some interaction
 Audience is attentive
 Speech is clear

Apprentice
 Shows about a week’s work
 A little information – some in my own words
 Adults have done some of it for me
 No interaction with the audience
 No humour
 Poor presentation
 Few pictures

Novice
 Reads the words on the PowerPoint or GlogClearly started at the last minute
 Hardly any info
 Parents have done a lot of it for me
 No pictures or steps
 Copied straight off the internet
 No humour
 Not finished on time
 Untidy presentation
 Speech is not very clear

home fun term 2

98%

I think i did well because i got better that last
time.
Next time i would like to get 1oo% .
i could get my book singed every time
because that's what i didn't get a yes.

my term two goal

my term two goal was ''to get better at my spelling '' and i did
my base score at the the start was 15 but now i am on 21 .
I think I did do well!!

Term 2 PI

For my and Lucy's PI we are doing Golf because we thought we could make it more interesting and that is why we choose golf as our term 2 PI.

my times working out (2)

my times video (1)

one of my best discription

Browns and reds yellows and orange levees
falling from the trees covering the ground
like a big carpet that never stops

As you walk upon the crunchy colorful carpet
with the fresh air biting at your neck
and the wind slowly blowing a way the carpet

You feel safe like notting can hurt you
you start to forget all your worry's
and your problems slip away
all you can do as stand and stare
at the beautiful autumn levees


i learn t that the more voice you put in the better
your writing gets.
i did good voice like ''Browns and reds yellows and orange levees
falling from the trees covering the ground
like a big carpet that never stops''
my next leaning step is
to add more things like'' bright Browns and reds yellows and orange

one of my best vis lang

This is one of my best visual language
because it is bright and bold and all the pictures
go with the poem. The border captures my eye.

Cross crounty laps count

I did good because I did my goal every time
Next time I would give myself a harder goal
I learn t that if you keep a past you can go farther.

Glog self assessment

zia and my tsunami glog

We had lots of info about the topic
Next time we could have more pictures
I learnt that they dont look bad but they are and they can go as fast as 80 km

stage six maths test

I did better then last time but I could do better

home fun team 1

94%
I think I did will but I could do better

team 2 goal

comments on pi

kids pi comments

sr for term 1 goal

I think I did my term 1 goal
but I could get better.

Personal Investigations Assessment Matrix

Personal Investigations

Assessment Matrix

Expert
 Shows weeks of work
 Audience is very interested
 I've done the work myself
 Research in my words – with my personality in it
 Contains humour(?)
 Interaction with the audience
 Speech is confident, clear and with action and expression

Practititioner
 Shows three or four weeks of work
 Contains pictures and steps
 Information is interesting and in my own words
 Adults have supported me without doing work for me
 Some humour
 Some interaction
 Audience is attentive
 Speech is clear

Apprentice
 Shows about a week’s work
 A little information – some in my own words
 Adults have done some of it for me
 No interaction with the audience
 No humour
 Poor presentation
 Few pictures

Novice
 Clearly started at the last minute
 Hardly any info
 Parents have done a lot of it for me
 No pictures or steps
 Copied straight off the internet
 No humour
 Not finished on time
 Untidy presentation
 Speech is not very clear

My best strategies

I did easy ways to work out both problems.
My next step would to learn more ways.
The number line strategies add don't sub.

my best writing

I was very creative with my writing.
I learnt when to put fullstops in.
My next lerning step is to put have before done

My Wordle

My best visual language

Next time I would of have done block letters

I did good pictures because they go with the poem

I learnt that the more brighter colours you use it stands out more

my interview sheet term 1 2010

graces bank account

graces bank account

I budgeted my snides

I did not spend them all

Next time I would not get as much out

I leant that you really have to keep them

safe because people will take them

divison

This one has always been my worst and it sill is.

times

Times has always been my best
but now it is not

sub

This one is not to good because
I did not get over 80%

plus

my addition fact were the best because
I got over 80% on this test

this is my smarts

stage six maths test

I did my basic facts part of the test well

Next time i would do more on the `write the word
I learnt that I should go for the ones I know first

my goal

thorws with a tennis ball

I think my 1st and 2nd were the best average`s

I could improve on my 3rd one because it is behind

I would try to get them all around the same height if we do it again.

my first visual language

I think I did great pictures that go what my work
I could do a better border next time
I learn that brighter and bolder are better than pale because it caches the eyes of people

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