MY END OF YEAR WORDLE

mangering self

first mangering self
second mangering self
third mangering self

my hip hop hippo vis lang

I learnt that when you use bright and bold colors It stands out more.
Next time I would color all 1 way.
I did my hippo well.

Quiddage writing

La soupers was the business I was in. It was me ,Maddy,Luce and Zia. we made taste tingly soup and soft mouth watering bread .

In one week we made 10,000 snidges or that what I heard. We made lots of money because we had good price and great veg soup.Our prices are : 10 and 20 and 40 singes for bread 10 for a small 20 for a median and 40 for a large. soup s50.We got lots of awesome feed back.

I really enjoy working In or business. It was so amazing.

hurdles

Bang! I got in to the finals for hurdles . And this is the story of how I did what I did ...

We got in groups for the the hurdles '' 5 people in a group,'' said Mr Bron ''girls first no time to waste''.

I got in to a group my heart pounding I was so so nervous [ at this time I did not know I was going to get in to the finals] .

On your marks get set good luck go and we were off The bang was so loud it was like a boom louder than any other boom . All I could think about is run jump run jump every time I would jump.

I passed the finish line 2ND and got a lovely light blue rod and was sent back down to race again. On you marks get set go we were off again we did this until we got to the finals.

And thats the story of the girls 10 and 11 year old hurdles races .

YEAR 6 WRITING

Camp was the most fantastic thing we did all year. We went to pretty palmgrove in kool kapit and went on a bright white long water slide and at the end was dark brown middy water. This is one thing that I did when I was a year 6 and it was amazing. I will hate to leave Riverdale but I have to go.There is so many great teachers like wonderful Walker and cool Currie and there is so much to do in fact I there is more to do than legs on a long green millipede. Thanks riverdale for lots of things to do and I want to wish you luck for years to come and for one last time I want to say GOODBYE!!!!!

speeches

Speeches

Written and Oral Language

We are learning to:

Present material, conveying meaning clearly and accurately

Write and speak, expressing personal viewpoints, sequencing ideas logically

Speech Topic: drugs

		Self Assessment from video	Speech in front of class
Success Criteria:
Speech Writing
My speech followed the hamburger technique and was logically sequenced		yes	yes
The point I was making was easy to understand		yes	yes
My speech contained research		yes	yes
My speech had voice and was interesting		yes	yes
My speech was in my words		yes	yes
My big idea comes through strongly		yes	yes
Presentation
I enunciated my words clearly		yes	1-2
Terminal consonants
Ts and ds in the middles of words
Swallowed my goobies first
Seperated my words
My voice was loud enough		yes	1-2
I learnt my speech off by heart		yes	yes
I used expression in my voice		yes	yes
I used enough volume to be heard by all		yes	yes
I used eye-contact		yes	1-2
My speech was not too fast, not too slow		yes	1-2
My speech was between 2 and 3 minutes		yes	Yes
My presentation materials supported but didn’t repeat my words		­‑	-
Total:		Expert	Expert

Novice – 5 Apprentice – 6 Practitioner – 11 Expert – 14

Self Assessment after Video

Self Assessment after Speech






speech video